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You felt the odd presence of a creature you hate the most.


Why escape?



There must be someone in your life… You know who is a vampire.



 


 


It’s close to winter…


I don’t know why it has to be this way.



Here I am in school, listening to my annoying teacher’s lectures about legends.


On and on. She never shuts up.


I’m Nina, an odd fourteen year old girl.


I tend to doubt my confidence. Along with legends and fairytales.


But who are you to expect. No one gets to see many vampires and were wolves….



I at least thought that they barely existed till one day I’ve met a kid named Derek…


He’s the same age as I am.. Kind of different, yet interesting.


He seemed harmless. Very, very.. Anti social.


Ah, what the heck. He’s human, right?


That’s what I said.


Until…



I was in second period, no one was around.


Derek was with me and we were chatting, normal teenager things.


We were looking for a book to take back into art..


After a while we got quiet. I got bored…


Derek suddenly fell very silent, when I looked at him, he looked like he had a fever or something…


He was panting softly and he started to slump into his chair.


I got curious and worried…



“You alright, Derek?” I asked.


He put his hand on my shoulder.



“Y-es.” He replied.



For some reason I got a chill down my spine, as if a cold claw was skinning down my spinal cord.


I shuddered and hugged Derek.



He felt a little too hot for a fever. I seriously got worried by then.


“Derek, are you sure you’re alright?” I mumbled.



He nodded gently.


He got up slowly and he beckoned me along.


I tilted my head in curiosity and followed him.



“Where are we going? Why the cafeteria?” I asked.



“You’ll see…” Derek chanted.



The way he gripped my hand kind of left a message: He needed me. For some reason, he needed me..



“Do me a favor, Nina?” He implored.



“What’s that?”



“Don’t freak…” He whispered.



“Wha?--” I paused.



Time froze, everything I was able to see I no longer could. Everything was a blur.


I look down and there’s a puddle of blood below my feet.


My eyes widen and I flip out.


I try to move, though I’m still… And I cannot figure out why.


While looking over, to see where Derek is. There are fangs shattered into my neck. With blood being poured out miraculously.



The ringing in my ears tone down and everything starts to move again. I look over at Derek again and I see the same fangs, that are his. I reach to feel my neck. A sharp pain fills in my whole body. I yelp quietly and put my hand down.


I stare at Derek and he licks his fangs.



“Wh.. What are you?!” I questioned.



He stayed silent.



“Why would you..-- Are you.. A vampire?!… What did you do to me?…” I continued on.



“I’m so sorry, Nina…” He quietly said.



“No, sorry… Sorry can’t fill in that pain.. What did you do to me?! ANSWER ME…” I begged.



“I.. I couldn’t resist… It.. Just took over.. That craving.” He mumbled.



“Wh.. WHAT?!” I yelled.



He rushed over and covered my mouth shut.


He shushed me and hugged me tightly.


I pushed him away and began to feel light headed.


I stared at Derek and gave him the question of why and fell over.


A few minutes later he woke me, telling me I should come back to art class with him.


I was mad at him and scared… But I agreed.



If this answers your questioning to why I passed out in the hallway that day, guys.


There’s the answer…



After second period, I was walking in the hallway.


Everything was very dizzy and I could barely see. Like tunnel vision gathering up.


I got up to near the girl’s bathroom and from there I saw my friend, Jade.


I tried to beckon her over, trying to ask her to help.. Right before I could say anything…


My body went super cold, loud ringing filled my hearing, and I started to see black all around me.




Vampire Story.

Theme: [link]

Characters: Almost anyone.
Main Characters:
Derek, Nina.

PLEASE READ THIS.. REALLY IMPORTANT.



Lys, everyone... This would answer why that day I've passed out in the hallway. Why everyone seemed to gather 'round and wondered what had happened to me...
Believe it or not, it's what happened.

DON'T KILL ME. O_O;

- I WOULD TYPE IN WHAT I REALLY SAID WHEN HE BIT ME, BUT IT'S TOO DRAMATIC. LAWL...



You felt the odd presence of a creature you hate the most.
Why escape?

There must be someone in your life… You know who is a vampire.



It’s close to winter…
I don’t know why it has to be this way.

Here I am in school, listening to my annoying teacher’s lectures about legends.
On and on. She never shuts up.
I’m Nina, an odd fourteen year old girl.
I tend to doubt my confidence. Along with legends and fairytales.
But who are you to expect. No one gets to see many vampires and were wolves….

I at least thought that they barely existed till one day I’ve met a kid named Derek…
He’s the same age as I am.. Kind of different, yet interesting.
He seemed harmless. Very, very.. Anti social.
Ah, what the heck. He’s human, right?
That’s what I said.
Until…

I was in second period, no one was around.
Derek was with me and we were chatting, normal teenager things.
We were looking for a book to take back into art..
After a while we got quiet. I got bored…
Derek suddenly fell very silent, when I looked at him, he looked like he had a fever or something…
He was panting softly and he started to slump into his chair.
I got curious and worried…

“You alright, Derek?” I asked.
He put his hand on my shoulder.

“Y-es.” He replied.

For some reason I got a chill down my spine, as if a cold claw was skinning down my spinal cord.
I shuddered and hugged Derek.

He felt a little too hot for a fever. I seriously got worried by then.
“Derek, are you sure you’re alright?” I mumbled.

He nodded gently.
He got up slowly and he beckoned me along.
I tilted my head in curiosity and followed him.

“Where are we going? Why the cafeteria?” I asked.

“You’ll see…” Derek chanted.

The way he gripped my hand kind of left a message: He needed me. For some reason, he needed me..

“Do me a favor, Nina?” He implored.

“What’s that?”

“Don’t freak…” He whispered.

“Wha?--” I paused.

Time froze, everything I was able to see I no longer could. Everything was a blur.
I look down and there’s a puddle of blood below my feet.
My eyes widen and I flip out.
I try to move, though I’m still… And I cannot figure out why.
While looking over, to see where Derek is. There are fangs shattered into my neck. With blood being poured out miraculously.

The ringing in my ears tone down and everything starts to move again. I look over at Derek again and I see the same fangs, that are his. I reach to feel my neck. A sharp pain fills in my whole body. I yelp quietly and put my hand down.
I stare at Derek and he licks his fangs.

“Wh.. What are you?!” I questioned.

He stayed silent.

“Why would you..-- Are you.. A vampire?!… What did you do to me?…” I continued on.

“I’m so sorry, Nina…” He quietly said.

“No, sorry… Sorry can’t fill in that pain.. What did you do to me?! ANSWER ME…” I begged.

“I.. I couldn’t resist… It.. Just took over.. That craving.” He mumbled.

“Wh.. WHAT?!” I yelled.

He rushed over and covered my mouth shut.
He shushed me and hugged me tightly.
I pushed him away and began to feel light headed.
I stared at Derek and gave him the question of why and fell over.
A few minutes later he woke me, telling me I should come back to art class with him.
I was mad at him and scared… But I agreed.

If this answers your questioning to why I passed out in the hallway that day, guys.
There’s the answer…

After second period, I was walking in the hallway.
Everything was very dizzy and I could barely see. Like tunnel vision gathering up.
I got up to near the girl’s bathroom and from there I saw my friend, Jade.
I tried to beckon her over, trying to ask her to help.. Right before I could say anything…
My body went super cold, loud ringing filled my hearing, and I started to see black all around me.







During biting part what I really said:

"D... DEREK... WHAT'RE YOU DOING?? STOP!"

"GET OFF OF ME.. WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!"

"S-STOP..!"

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Siikk's avatar
So, of course I've learned that art theft is the artist's responsibility, no one else's.
I respect that, for it is fuckin' durrtrue.
But! I would appreciate it if a few people would take action to an extent. Of course, proof is needed, it can't be just words.

So. I'm bringing proof to you, heather, sorry lmfao.
But hey, you were the one to reach it.<3

most credit goes to heather for catching the thief in action. o w o
BAYUM!

Please notify others here on deviant art, Totemlands, wolfhome, and any other site related to those!

Darkabyss, Slumdog, or what ever.
She gives and excuse such as:

Oh, my friend gave it to me. I didn't know.

or

But I bought it.


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